3.3.22

 Today in class we went over what we do wrong when writing a essay. I was not in school that day the class wrote these essays so I had and advantage and learned five things to avoid when writing a essay. Five things I we need to work on as a class when writing a essay is run on sentences, unnecessary long introductions, punctuations, the body paragraph being examples to your introduction, and unnecessary information. 

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